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An Angel sent to us!

With tenderness she hold this flesh of mine, 
All my doubts gone and fears but surrenders. 
Soothing lullaby she hums when in odd hours I've cried helplessly. 
The lips whispered, and still whispers a prayer for me.. 
To light the path, and lead the way. 
How great is this love that never failed to embrace me?! 
Your hand held tight against mine- 
As you help me learn ABC's.. 
And still holding it tight when amongst crowd I shudder; 
longing for a company. 
The seed of love you have sown, 
blossoms amidst the reigning shadows. 
The kiss that cast all my pains away- 
Reminding me, life is not always a bed of roses, 
Yet a little faith and love and a prayer can bring a rainbow in the cloud. 
The comfort in your tunes, 
lifts up a heavy heart. 
Your feet that walked with me life's uphills and downs- 
From cradle to those tiny steps made.. 
And even closer now as we journeyed on. 
May you always be blessed, 
Bringing joy wherever you go. 
Each one cherish her and be glad, 
For an angel walks the earth. 
A mother, an angel- 
''AN ANGEL SENT TO US'. 

''Happy Mothers Day''.

COMMENT (5) PHA TA..  
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#5#5 Minlun leivang » 2013-05-16 02:32

nalh mah mah e olivia........ :-) :-) :-)

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#4#4 Singvadangtu » 2013-05-15 02:32

Wow Olivia, good job keep it up! don't know you personally but I would grade A+. You can do it!

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#3#3 THOMAS » 2013-05-14 10:09

The ideas and themes are great. Perhaps the budding poet needs to work on her grammar.

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#2#2 aihnake » 2013-05-14 09:19

NIce one, keep it up!

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#1#1 thangzamuanguite » 2013-05-13 13:27

Olivia, indeed ya a talented poet. keep it u! ya poem is indeed touching and inspiring

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